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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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First off lets start with vision. Love the background and your character fits in very beautifully with it, however there is just one huge thing that I have to point out. You have too much open space. Make no doubt the fire helps get rid of the open space, however if you were to crop it a bit more to where she isn't centered but the negative space isn't noticeable, then I think it would have turned our phenomenal. Your shading is getting better, and I think this is personally the best you have done in your body proportions and textures. Her scarf looks good but I think that shading should have been put next to the lines to bold it.
Originality, well considering that your character is completely original and I love her, I have to give you that. The only thing is that I have seen the fire bit in so many different peoples art. I would have suggested giving the fire a different color, however being that it matches her outfit so perfectly, this is fine the way it is.
Technique. Your technique i getting better, and I can tell your starting to unlock your paint programs full potential. You also have mastered on how to make your backgrounds look less flat, something that I still fail at doing.
Impact. Defiantly made me want to draw some of my characters. Nice job, I was given a sort of, LETS DO THIS TSUNA bad ass emotion. Which I am assuming is what you are going for.
Flaws, Some were listed above but I think besides that is that the fire looks like the edge of a flame. try mixing some colors in there for a better effect.
I'M THE ART CRITIC AND THAT WAS MY SHOW.
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